I decided to looks up blogs on first kisses and stumbled upon a really interesting story about a Mormon kid who experienced his first kiss and his first heart break. He fell for a girl from his church and the same day they broke up was the same day they had their first kiss. The main thing about this blog was that he explained that instead of him being hurt due to the break up he thought of it as a "life experience". The author used a lot of good descriptions of the girl, the kiss and he used a lot of good sequencing. The blog caught my eye because he started the scene off as very descriptive scene of him in a car with this "wonder girl" named Eliza. The author Kevin Barney makes the girl seem amazing and gives her credit for giving him the experience although she broke up with him.
Kevin used a word-euphemistically which I had to look up. According to Dictionary.com it means "the substitution of a vague, mild, or indirect expression for one thought to be offensive, harsh, or blunt." He used this word to describe the way his dream girl Eliza said that she wanted to slow things down.
HERE'S THE LINK TO THE BLOG:






